I hated it when you were sick;
how angry I’d get when
you moved too quickly,
how mad you’d be for being so weak.
So don’t be frail, now,
stay here longer.
I don’t want to lose you.
Stay here
before I lose myself with you.
You told me to take care of you
and then told me to pay
attention to my needs
when I was lost with yours.
Please, don’t be weak, now,
breathe longer.
I don’t want to lose you.
Stay here
before your struggle runs too deep.
And then I’d say to myself
“why did I not do this sooner,”
taking care of you was bliss
but not like this, like this…
just don’t be frail, now,
last longer.
I don’t want to lose you.
stay here, move closer
before you drift away from me.
Comes across as very heartfelt.
It is, I had written it three days earlier, before I knew about the prompt.
Not sure how that fits with the rules of daily wordpress prompts though.
Thanks for commenting, I appreciate it :)
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Thanks for reading Mae. I read your post, it’s very sweet. Keep your mom close =)
Thanks…I appreciate :)
makes me cherish my mother.
Me too, keep her close :)
Thank you for commenting, Savannah.
I too have written a post about my mum, your words brought a tear – lovely Lila.